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i love this so much, i wish i could keep gushing on about it XD
Yeah I tried a mixture of clamp proportions and more real ones, thank you for such elaborate comment!!
The hair is what strikes me as a bit lazy, straight lines - hair doesn't look like that in motion, I'd suggest drawing flowing ~ lines instead of straight ones to add to the flow of the picture if you ever attempt to maybe fix it. The picture could also use some shading, since the coloring is very flat.
One thing I do like (two, rather) are her hands.
That's all I can think of, hope it's helpful.